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The charts below show the percentage of their daily intake of various nutrients the average person in the USA consumes in each meal and in snacks. Theses nutrients may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

The diagram illustrate regular intake of several nutrients on a daily basis consumed by average population in USA which might be not healthy is taken in large quantity. In the figure the total intake of sodium and saturated fat (respectively 43% and 37%) in dinner is higher than the other meals. While in case of added sugar, snacks contains the larger amount 42%, dinner 23%, lunch 19%, breakfast 16%. Second highest meal is lunch which contains higher nutrients. Also, as per the research these nutrients are not good for one's health if consumed in larger amount.

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