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The table below provides information on rental charges and salaries in three areas of London.

The provided table illustrate the details regarding the debt charged in different suburbs of London and the amount of income required to hire those apartments. The glance at the chart reveals that Nothing hills is the most expensive area in London, whereas Fulham is the cheapest, however in nothing the rent was 375 pounds per week, while for 2 bed apartment it is 485 pounds and for 3 beds it is 738 pounds. Beside, this the salary required for hiring these flats is between 98, 500 pounds to 194, 000 pounds per year. Futher, in Regent 's park the amount of rent charged for one bed was 325 pounds, whereas for 3 beds it is 650 pounds. The annual salary needed is 85, 500 pounds to 170, 500 pounds, similarly in Fulham the rent starts 215£ and goes to 600£ for 3 beds apartment. The annual income require for living in this area is 56, 500£ for two bed and 157, 500 for 3 beds room. Overall, Nothing hill is not costly area in London, whereas Fulham is the cheapest. The rent as well as the salary increase according to the size of apartment.
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in nothing the
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was 375 pounds per week, while for 2
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it is 485 pounds and for 3
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it is 738 pounds. Beside, this the salary required for hiring these flats is between 98, 500 pounds to 194, 000 pounds per year. Futher, in Regent 's park the amount of
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charged for one
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was 325 pounds, whereas for 3
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it is 650 pounds. The annual salary needed is 85, 500 pounds to 170, 500 pounds,
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in Fulham the
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215£ and goes to 600£ for 3
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IELTS academic The table below provides information on rental charges and salaries in three areas of London.

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