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how ethanol fuel is produced from corn.

the above diagram shows how the ethanol fuel is produced from corn as the diagram shows the procedure step by step. the first place is given to the plantation of corn by the farmers and then it will be stored by them the next they sell it to the company who use to make fuel after that the tons of corn is transfers to the milling company they wash it and then put into the large machineries and cook it for about 4 hours with mixing water after the 4 hours of cooking it place to get ferment about 48 hours which is 2 days. the next day they separate the liquid by product and solid by product with the help of machineries
the above diagram
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shows
how the ethanol fuel
is produced
from corn as the diagram
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shows
the procedure step by step. the
first
place is
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given
to the plantation of corn by the farmers and then it will
be stored
by them the
next
they sell it to the
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company
who
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use
to
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make
fuel after that the tons of corn is transfers to the milling
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company
they wash it and then put into the large machineries and cook it for about 4 hours with mixing water after the 4 hours of cooking it place to
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get
ferment about 48 hours which is 2 days. the
next
day they separate the liquid by product and solid by product with the
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help
of machineries

IELTS academic how ethanol fuel is produced from corn.

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