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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The provided line graph gives information about how many tourists going to a particular island, called Carbbean in order to visit during an eight-year period starting in 2010. Overall, it is evidet that the number of visitors who stayed on cruise ships and others, staying on the island, experienced a sharp increase during the entire period. Therefore, it made a contribution to rise significantly the total of tourists. In 2010, The figure for people who stayed on cruise ships so as to visit the island stood at approximately 0. 3 millions, whereas other category was higher at almost 0. 7. From this year onwards, these figures grew up dramatically by roughly 1. 7 millions and 0. 8 millions, respectively. It is worth nothing that the number of tourists satying on the ships exceeded that of visitors staying on the island. Besides, it is obvious that the entire population who got accomodation in the ships and the island rose from 1 millions to 3. 5 millions in the time frame
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, called Carbbean in order to visit during an eight-year period starting in 2010.

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ships
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and others
, staying on the
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island
, experienced a sharp increase during the entire period.
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the total of tourists.

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who stayed on cruise
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as to visit the
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island
stood at approximately 0. 3
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, whereas other category was higher at almost 0. 7. From this year onwards, these figures grew up
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and 0. 8
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millions
,
respectively
. It is worth nothing that the number of tourists satying on the
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exceeded that of visitors staying on the
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island
.
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, it is obvious that the entire population who
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accomodation in the
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and the
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rose from 1
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to 3. 5
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in the time frame

IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

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