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The chart below shows the number of visitors to a local cinema last year according to the age.

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The pie chart demonstrates the information of tourists to a local theatre in the last year according to their age. The data has been calibrated in percentile. Overall, it is clear that the visitors who more exhausted to visit cinema that were above 55 olds than the other age group. On scrutinizing the data, it is lucid that, the highest percentage of visitors was accounted in senior citizens over 55 that was 42% followed by the younger and middle age people that were 35 and 18 percentum orderly. However, the lessen percentage was noticed in the middle age group that was almost 8%. Movingfurther, the percentage of those people who never interested to visit cinema that was belong to age 5-14 although it was negligible value. Whilst, the age group 15-24 was far higher than the aged 25-34.

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