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The bar chart illustrated the information that the number of people around 25 and 34 years old either owned a domicile or rented a house. According to the chart, the figure of home owners in 2004 peaked the highest point with nearly 58%. Between 2008 and 2011, there was a continuous increase in renters from closely 37% to 41%. In particular, was the number of renters remained the same with almost 23% in 2005 and 2006. Also, there was a maintained quantity in home owners with nearly 43% between 2011 and 2012. In conclusion, 2004 was the year which had the highest figure in home owners with 68% and also experienced the lowest renters with 20%.
The bar chart illustrated the information that the number of
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people
around 25 and 34 years
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either
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owned
a domicile or rented a
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. According to the chart, the figure of
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home owners
in 2004 peaked the highest point with
nearly
58%. Between 2008 and 2011, there was a continuous increase in renters from
closely
37% to 41%.
In particular
, was the number of renters remained the same with almost 23% in 2005 and 2006.
Also
, there was a maintained quantity in
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home owners
with
nearly
43% between 2011 and 2012.
In conclusion
, 2004 was the year which had the highest figure in
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home owners
with 68% and
also
experienced the lowest renters with 20%.
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