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The bar charts show the cost of airline ticket for travelling from Sydney to Melbourne and the reverse trip

The bar charts show the cost of airline ticket for travelling from Sydney to Melbourne and the reverse trip q17d5

The first bar chart represents the cost of airline ticket for travelling from Sydney to Melbourne, for the first two weeks in 2013. The second bar card provides the same information for return trip from Melbourne to Sydney for the same weeks and the year. The data is calibrated in dollars. Overall, ticket price of Sydney to Melbourne and vice-versa, followed the same pattern for the week 1. On the other hand, Thursdays and Saturdays shown some price difference for the second week. To begin with trip towards Melbourne from Sydney, the ticket was highly priced on Monday, which was $80. On Tuesday and Wednesday, cost was the same at $35, which was increased by $5 on Thursday. Suddenly, the price hiked to $75 on Friday and reduced by $5 on the next day. First week’s Sunday had a ticket price of $50. Except for the second week’s Monday, which had its ticket cost of $50, remaining days followed the same price as first week. In the case travel from Sydney to Melbourne, on the first Monday ticket was priced at $60, after which it suddenly fell to $35 for the next three days. Surprisingly, on Friday the price notch up to $80 and fell to $60 as same as Monday, on the next day. On Sunday, the ticket was sold at $50. For the second week, Monday had the second lowest price of $40. Next three days had the same price as first week’s respective days. On Friday, fare scaled to $60 and dropped to $50 for the last two days

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