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The maps reflect the small town center named Islip and it's future redesign plans.

The maps reflect the small town center named Islip and it's future redesign plans. Pkd0J
The maps reflect the small town center named Islip and it's future redesign plans. Overall, the plan consists of replacing straight main road with a circle road and assigning the old one as pedestrian road and adding different purposed buildings around this road. Currently the town center has a main road which surrounded by both sides with shops. The school connects to the main road from the left end of the shops which is at the southwest. The park which is located at southeast just below the shops, has a connection to the main road from the east side of the shops. The housings are placed between the school and the park. After the plan applied, the main road will be changed to circled dual carriageway which goes around the center and provides direct access to more facilities, the previous road will banned the vehicles entrance. The shops at the north of the main road will be replaced by a bus station, a shopping Centre, a car park and a new housing. The school and the park will have a direct access to the new main road and they will have some refurbishment. The housings will be relocated and the new ones will be added.
The maps reflect the
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small
town center named
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Islip
and it's future redesign plans.
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, the plan consists of replacing straight
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main
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road
with a circle
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road
and assigning the
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old
one as pedestrian
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road
and adding
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different
purposed buildings around this road.

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Currently
the town center has a
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main
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road
which surrounded by both sides with
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shops
. The school connects to the
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main
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road
from the
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left
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end
of the
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shops
which is at the southwest. The park which
is located
at southeast
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just
below the
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shops
, has a connection to the
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main
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road
from the east side of the
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shops
.
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The
housings
are placed
between the school and the park.

After the plan applied, the
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main
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road
will be
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changed
to circled dual carriageway which goes around the center and provides direct access to more facilities, the previous
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road
will
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banned
the vehicles entrance. The
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shops
at the north of the
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main
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road
will
be replaced
by a bus station, a shopping
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, a car park and a new housing. The school and the park will have
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a direct access
to the new
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main
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road and
they will have
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some
refurbishment.
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The
housings will
be relocated
and the new ones will be
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added
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IELTS academic The maps reflect the small town center named Islip and it's future redesign plans.

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6.0
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