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The chart below shows the number of people who were killed in the road accidents in four different countries from 1991 to 1998.

The chart below shows the number of people who were killed in the road accidents in four different countries from 1991 to 1998. 70716
The information that how many individuals were died in the road mishappance in various territories between 1991 and 1998 has been rendered by line graph. From an overall analysis, it is readily apparent that overall up ward trend was followed by Algeria and Nigeria, while exceptional nations depicted its opposite trend throughout the period of 8 year. With regards to Algeria, 30000 people were no more initially, after displaying fluctuations it touched peak point, which was recorded to be 60000 in final year. Escalating from 20000 in 1991 to 30000 in 1993, the figure remained stagnated till 1995 of Nigerian natives, before reaching at 50000 in 1998, a slight fall of 10000 could be observed in 1995 and 1996. In terms of Zambia and Zimbabwe, discrepancy of 5000 can be noticed, it was 50000 and approximately 45000, respectively. The former state count dwindled sharply by 40000 due to follow zig zag path over a span of passing time; however, the later country number of died masses were ranging in 45000 and 30000 during the given time period.
The information that how
many
individuals were
died
in the road
mishappance
in various territories between 1991 and 1998 has
been rendered
by line graph. From an
overall
analysis, it is
readily
apparent that
overall
up ward trend
was followed
by Algeria and Nigeria, while exceptional nations depicted its opposite trend throughout the period of 8 year.
With regards to
Algeria, 30000
people
were no more
initially
, after displaying fluctuations it touched peak point, which
was recorded
to be 60000 in final year. Escalating from 20000 in 1991 to 30000 in 1993, the figure remained stagnated till 1995 of Nigerian natives,
before
reaching at 50000 in 1998, a slight fall of 10000 could
be observed
in 1995 and 1996. In terms of Zambia and Zimbabwe, discrepancy of 5000 can
be noticed
, it was 50000 and approximately 45000,
respectively
. The former state count dwindled
sharply
by 40000 due to follow
zig zag
path over a span of passing time;
however
, the later country number of
died
masses were ranging in 45000 and 30000 during the
given
time period.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the number of people who were killed in the road accidents in four different countries from 1991 to 1998.

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