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The chart below shows making soft cheese.

The chart below shows making soft cheese. xxQ66
The process chart illustrates the formation of soft cheese. Initiating with a mixture of water and milk, after mixing it is cold for 2 hours at 5 ° c temperature. Then, with the presence of salt it is ready for fermentation, it is fermented at 35°c for 2 hours. After fermentation, evaporate the this substance at 100°c forr long hours (8hours) from which steam us released during evaporation. After then, again cooling the in tanker, from one side filter waste material is released and through other soft cheese is formed at 5°c. Wrapping up, it is clear that procedure of making soft cheese involves five steps which make it long and time consuming process.
The process chart illustrates the formation of soft cheese. Initiating with a mixture of water and milk, after mixing it is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cold
for 2 hours at
For the unit symbols for degree, minute, and second for plane angle no space is left between the numerical value and the unit symbol: "5°" or add a missing unit symbol (e.g., "5 °C").
5 °
c temperature. Then, with the presence of salt it is ready for fermentation, it
is fermented
at 35°c for 2 hours.

After fermentation, evaporate
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the this
substance at 100°c
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forr
long hours (8hours) from which steam us released during evaporation. After then, again cooling the in tanker, from one side filter waste material
is released
and through other soft cheese
is formed
at 5°c. Wrapping up, it is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
that procedure of making soft cheese involves five steps which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
it long and
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
time consuming
process.
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