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The chart below shows the number of members talking part in different sports activities at Santon Sports Club from 1995 to present day.

The chart below shows the number of members talking part in different sports activities at Santon Sports Club from 1995 to present day. 1adXM
The line graph illustrates the changes in the number of members in four different sports activities at Santon Sports Club in 30 years from 1990 to now. Overall, while the numbers of the members joining in the fitness classes and circuit training increased significantly, that on other kinds of research, the numbers of racket and swimming club have a downward trend. In 1990, fitness classes had the fewest members at about 120 members. Swimming and circuit training had the higher members, at about 150 and 250 respectively, while racquet sports had the highest people at about 300 members at the time. Was seen from 1995 to now, there has fluctuated in four these sports. Fitness classes and circuit training have an upward trend. In the early 1995 and mid-2000, there has experienced a rapid surge to 210 and 270 at respectively and had leveled off. Since then, both groups have been further rising until now. During the period between 1995 to 2000, members of the swimming club increased marginally and rise by around 25 members. By contrast, racquet sports had shown a downward trend that was recorded at approximately 175 members in 2000. And two these groups have been dropping gradually since 2000 to now.
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Club in 30 years from 1990 to
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joining in the fitness classes and circuit training increased
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, that on other kinds of research, the numbers of racket and swimming club have a downward trend.

In 1990, fitness classes had the fewest
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members
at about 120
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. Swimming and circuit training had the higher
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, at about 150 and 250
respectively
, while racquet
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had the highest
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at about 300
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from 1995 to
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, there has fluctuated in four these
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sports
. Fitness classes and circuit training have an upward trend. In the early 1995 and mid-2000, there has experienced a rapid surge to 210 and 270 at
respectively
and had leveled off. Since then, both groups have been
further
rising until
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,
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of the swimming club increased
marginally
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. By contrast, racquet
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had shown a downward trend that
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in 2000. And two these groups have been dropping
gradually
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now
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the number of members talking part in different sports activities at Santon Sports Club from 1995 to present day.

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