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The chart below shows how four European countries deal with their cities waste in four different way. Four countries: Netherland, Italy, Spain, UK. Four ways: landfill, recycle, biologically treated, burnt.

The given chart illustrates on how four different countries deal with their city waste disposal in four different ways. Overall, Netherland holds peak percentage of waste disposal in burnt, when compared with other country disposals. In addition, UK set it's maximum percentage of disposal in landfill. To start with, percentage of waste disposal in Italy and UK have similar percentage in recycling of wastes. Whereas, Italy and Spain also holds same portion of waste disposals by means of burnt and biological treatments. In UK, we can see that countries percentage of waste disposal in biological treatments are zero, when distinguished with other four countries. Subsequently, UK and Netherland deals same percentage of waste disposal in burnt 10% and landfill 10%, respectively. Secondly, highest percentage of waste disposal is observed in UK, about 60% in landfill. Meanwhile, Netherland deals with their city waste more in the form of burnt, appropriately 45%. To conclude with, UK is delt with most of its disposals in landfill, but have zero percent of disposal in biological treatments.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows how four European countries deal with their cities waste in four different way. Four countries: Netherland, Italy, Spain, UK. Four ways: landfill, recycle, biologically treated, burnt.

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