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The chart shows the information relating to people within lS-minute drive service in a particular region in UK. It also compares the peopre riving in urban areas and people living in rural areas. write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given below.

The chart shows the information relating to people within lS-minute drive service in a particular region in UK. It also compares the peopre riving in urban areas and people living in rural areas. write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given below. NJDm
The bar graph illustrates the data about people in 15 minutes driving in a specific reason in the United Kingdom, and also in this graph compared to a native of urban areas and native of rural areas. Overall it can be seen that all citizens of cities reach their every destination within 15 minutes by drive service Whereas some people from a village not reach post office and primary school in 15 minutes driving. Looking at the bar graph in more detail, it is evident that the number of urban area's citizen who reaches 100% secondary school within 15 minutes drive, as well as rural area's citizen also reach. However, people of in cities 100% reach primary school in 15 minutes through drive but people of village areas only 65% get Primary School in 15 minutes driving. Turning to the remaining two data sets, all citizen of the Metropolitan Area easily reach the post office only in 15 minutes of service of drive, in contrast, 95% of frontiers people reach the post office in 15 minutes drive. For doctor reason, both people countryside and metropolis are rich in 15 minutes by driving. The given bar graph compares the access to medical, educational and postal services by the city and countryside people in a specific region in the United Kingdom. Overall, it can be seen that almost all urban people are within a fifteen-minute drive to all these mentioned services. Cent-percent urban and rural people have access to medical facilities. They are all within fifteen minutes drive to a doctor. Similarly, secondary school can be reached within 15 minutes by all residents of villages and cities. All city people have a post office in their propinquity. However, five per cent of villagers have to drive more than fifteen minutes to avail postal services. The biggest discrepancy lies in primary school facilities. Only sixty five percent of villagers have a primary school within a quarter of an hour drive, where as the remaining, approximately, one third inhabitants of countryside have to drive their children to far-off schools. Overall, the rural and urban communities have similar access to medical, postal and secondary school facilities but only about a third of villagers do not live close to a primary school.
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compared to a native of
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areas and native of
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areas.

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citizens
of
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cities
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reach
their every destination within 15 minutes by
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drive
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service
Whereas
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people
from a village not
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reach
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post
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office
and
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primary
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school
in 15 minutes driving.

Looking at the bar
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in more detail, it is evident that the number of
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urban
area's
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who
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reaches
100% secondary
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within 15 minutes
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primary
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in 15 minutes through
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people
of village areas
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in 15 minutes driving.

Turning to the remaining two data sets, all
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easily
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in 15 minutes of
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of
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in 15 minutes
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countryside and metropolis are rich in 15 minutes by driving. The
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compares the access to medical, educational and postal
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by the city and countryside
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in a specific region in the United Kingdom.
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that almost all
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are within a fifteen-minute
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to all these mentioned services.

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have access to medical facilities. They are all within fifteen minutes
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to a doctor.
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, secondary
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can
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in their propinquity.
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more than fifteen minutes to avail postal
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sixty five
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within a quarter of an hour
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the remaining, approximately, one third inhabitants of countryside
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their children to far-off schools.

Overall
, the
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communities have similar access to medical, postal and secondary
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school
facilities
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close to a
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school
.
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IELTS academic The chart shows the information relating to people within lS-minute drive service in a particular region in UK. It also compares the peopre riving in urban areas and people living in rural areas. write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given below.

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