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The chart below shows the number of different crimes carried out in Ipswich between 2007 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of different crimes carried out in Ipswich between 2007 and 2009. Xn1kg
The bar chart gives information about how many crimes were committed in Ipswich over a period of two years, starting in 2007. Overall, it can clearly be seen from the chart that there was a decrease in the number of criminals in the first three categories, namely murder, assault and burglary, with the exception of theft and robbery increased significantly. Besides that, people, who were assaulter, were considered to be the most common recorded crime in the comparison to the other crimes in 2007 and 2008. Looking at the first group for more details, it is evident that murder stood at approximately 200 in 2007, before falling down to 180 in 2008. In 2009, it reached a down of just over 150. Offenders who had a run – in with the law because of assaulting fluctuated from 250 in 2007 to about 225 in 2009. Although the number of people who carried out this crime dropped over the given period, they were considered to be the highest in two years, 2007 and 2008. Next, burglary seemed to be the less illegality that citizens commit. There were 160 burglars in 2007, went down to 170 in 2008 and continued to decreased to 130 in 2009. Turning to the number of individuals who do an offence that was theft, it started at 260. This proportion then felt dramatically to 180 in 2007. From 2007 until the end of the period, it reached a peak of more than 250. Furthermore, there were over 150 people who were robber. Subsequently, this proportion rose to nearly 200 in 2007. In 2009, the number of people who commit crime as robbery stood at 210.
The bar chart gives information about how
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crimes
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in Ipswich
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a period of two years, starting in 2007.

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seen
from the chart that there was a decrease in the
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number
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murder, assault and burglary,
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with the exception of
theft and robbery increased
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.
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people
,
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who
were assaulter,
were considered
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crime
in the comparison to the other
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crimes
in 2007 and 2008.

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details
, it is evident that murder stood at approximately 200 in 2007,
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falling down to 180 in 2008. In 2009, it reached a down of
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over
150. Offenders
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had a run
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–
in with the law
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of assaulting fluctuated from 250 in 2007 to about 225 in 2009. Although the
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over
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period, they
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, burglary seemed to be the less illegality that citizens commit. There were 160 burglars in 2007, went down to 170 in 2008 and continued to decreased to 130 in 2009.

Turning to the
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do an
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offence
that was theft, it
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started
at 260. This proportion then felt
dramatically
to 180 in 2007. From 2007 until the
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end
of the period, it reached a peak of more than 250.
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150
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people
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who
were robber.
Subsequently
, this proportion rose to
nearly
200 in 2007. In 2009, the
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as robbery stood at 210.

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