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The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for future years.

The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for future years. GqkB
chart illustrates the amounts of people leaving the rural to urban areas in Russia, Iran and Indonesia and for future prediction. Overall, the number of people moving from rural to urban areas are increased all in the three countries throughout the period and expected to have the same trend in the future. In Iran the number of people moved to urban area increased rapidly which took up the highest rate by 80 millions in 2020 and predicts to reach over 90 millions in 2025. The same trend apply on Russia which the number of people relocate from rural area to urban area went up from about 15 millions to just over 80 millions in 2020 with a prediction to strike 90 millions in 2025. In regard to Indonesia, the level showed significant rise from 10 millions in 2000 to affirmatively 30 millions in 2020 while the prediction will take up the same amount for the future by 30 millions are expected to leave the rural area.
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in Russia, Iran and Indonesia and for future prediction.
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, the number of
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moving from
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all in the three countries throughout the period and
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to have the same trend in the future. In Iran the number of
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increased
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which took up the highest rate by 80
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in 2020 and predicts to reach over 90
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in 2025. The same trend apply on Russia which the number of
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relocate from
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rural
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to
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went up from about 15
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over 80
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in 2020 with a prediction to strike 90
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in 2025. In regard to Indonesia, the level
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significant rise from 10
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in 2000 to
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30
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in 2020 while the prediction will take up the same amount for the future by 30
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for future years.

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