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The chart below shows the percentage of househoulds in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011

The chart below shows the percentage of househoulds in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011 pAG3
The given bar chart illustrates the data about persentage of owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011. Overall, during the whole time period owned accomodation rate has seen upward trend, while the rate of rented accommodation experienced downward trend. In more detail, in 1918 renting stood at more than 75% of households, whereas owning rate was more than three times smaller. Until 1961 percentage of rentals decreased slowly, despite the period of stabilization between 1939 and 1953. By 1971 ownership has rosen gradually and become the same as the ratio of rentals with 50%. Then the number of owned accommodation grew to almost 70% of total number in 1991 and remained the same until 2001. By the end of the given time period this percentage gradually decreased and stood at 65%. The number of rentals declined considerably after 1971 and in 1981 had only two fifth of the total number. After the period of plateau between 1991 and 2001 the percentage of rentals reached 35% in 2011.
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and rented accommodation in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
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owned
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accomodation
rate has
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upward trend, while the rate of rented accommodation experienced downward trend. In more detail, in 1918 renting stood at more than 75% of households, whereas owning rate was more than three times smaller. Until 1961 percentage of
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rentals
decreased
slowly
, despite the
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period
of stabilization between 1939 and 1953. By 1971 ownership has
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rosen
gradually
and become the same as the ratio of
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rentals
with 50%. Then the
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number
of
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owned
accommodation grew to almost 70% of total
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number
in 1991 and remained the same until 2001. By the
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of the
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time
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this percentage
gradually
decreased and stood at 65%. The
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of
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rentals
declined
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after 1971 and in 1981 had
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two fifth of the total
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. After the
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of plateau between 1991 and 2001 the percentage of
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rentals
reached 35% in 2011.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the percentage of househoulds in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011

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