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The bar graph gives information about the growth of world wealth in the period 2006-2015. Moreover, it projects the expected growth of world wealth in the period 2016-2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words

The bar graph gives information about the growth of world wealth in the period 2006-2015. Moreover, it projects the expected growth of world wealth in the period 2016-2025. kDAN
The bar graph illustrates the increase of accumulated global wealth from 2006 to 2015 and it also portrays the projected increase for the next nine years (2016-2025). To begin with, it is evident that, in the period from 2006 to 2015, all gathered world wealth was 6% while an increase was observed in two continents by 3% and 1% respectively, in Asia and Africa namely. Europe showed an increase by 6% in comparison with the global wealth rate, whereas North America was 5%. On the other hand, with regard to future projections, the world's average growth is bound to increase by 4% between 2016 and 2025. Compared to Europe, North America will expect a marginally increase by 1%, while the former will increase by 3%. In contrast, Asia is expected to reach a 12% increase and Africa will hit the highest point of 14% before 2025. Overall, the rates of world wealth are expected to increase but the most significat change will be seen in Asia and Africa until 2025.
The bar graph illustrates the
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of accumulated global
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wealth
from 2006 to 2015 and it
also
portrays the projected
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increase
for the
next
nine years (2016-2025). To
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begin
with, it is evident that, in the period from 2006 to 2015, all gathered world
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wealth
was 6% while an
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increase
was observed
in two continents by 3% and 1%
respectively
, in Asia and Africa
namely
. Europe
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showed
an
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increase
by 6%
in comparison
with the global
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wealth
rate, whereas North America was 5%.
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, with regard to future projections, the world's average growth
is bound
to
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increase
by 4% between 2016 and 2025. Compared to Europe, North America will
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expect
a
marginally
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increase
by 1%, while the former will
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increase
by 3%.
In contrast
, Asia is
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expected
to reach a 12%
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increase
and Africa will hit the highest point of 14%
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before
2025.
Overall
, the rates of world
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wealth
are
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in Asia and Africa until 2025.
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IELTS academic The bar graph gives information about the growth of world wealth in the period 2006-2015. Moreover, it projects the expected growth of world wealth in the period 2016-2025.

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