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The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901.

The table illustrates accurately in a detailed manner the exact number of workers and companies in two leading countries which are England and Wales within certain years lies from 1854 to 1901. Overall, the number of male employees outnumbered the female ones through these approximate 5 decads. Moreover, there is an inverse relation between factories development and total number of working stuff, where the less employment is the more factories founded. On the first hand, Male have allways had the more dominent hand in working either in simple or sophisticated jobs. However, women's involvment kept increasing markedly through years till it approximatly matched men's which is one of the keys that enlightens us to understand the role of women in any society. On the other hand, there is an obvious breakthrough in industrial world especially between 1861 and 1871 where number established factories elevated from 227 to 622. Neverthless, this number flactuated and ended up in a slight decrease from 1881 to 1901 reaching a final value of 600.
The table illustrates
accurately
in a detailed manner the exact
number
of workers and
companies
in two leading countries which are England and Wales within certain years lies from 1854 to 1901.

Overall
, the
number
of male employees outnumbered the female ones through these approximate 5
decads
.
Moreover
, there is an inverse relation between factories development and total
number
of working stuff, where the less employment is the more factories founded.

On the
first
hand, Male have
allways
had the more
dominent
hand in working either in simple or sophisticated jobs.
However
, women's
involvment
kept
increasing
markedly
through years till it
approximatly
matched
men
's which is one of the keys that enlightens us to understand the role of women in any society.

On the other hand
, there is an obvious breakthrough in industrial world
especially
between 1861 and 1871 where
number
established factories elevated from 227 to 622.
Neverthless
, this
number
flactuated
and ended up in a slight decrease from 1881 to 1901 reaching a final value of 600.
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IELTS academic The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901.

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