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The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010

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The chart illustrates the amount of money spent on five consumers goods (cars, computers, books, perfume and cameras ) in France and the UK in 2010. Units are measured in pounds sterling. Overall, the UK spent more money on consumers goods than France in the period given. Both the British and the French spent most of their money on cars whereas the least amount of money was spent on perfume in the UK compared to cameras in France. Furthermore, the most significant difference in expenditure between the two countries was on cameras. In terms of cars people in the UK spent about £450, 000 on this as opposed to the French at £400, 000. Similarly, the British expenditure was higher on books than the French (around £400, 000 and £300, 000 respectively ). In the UK, expenditure on cameras (just over £350, 000) was over double than of France, which was only £150, 000. On the other hand, the amount of money paid out on the remaining goods was higher in France. Above £350, 000 was spent by the French on computers which was slightly more than the British who spent exactly £350, 000. Neither of the countries spent much on perfume which accounted for £200, 000 of expenditure in France but under £150, 000 in the UK.
The chart illustrates the amount of
money
spent
on five consumers
goods
(cars, computers, books, perfume and
cameras
)
in France and the UK in 2010. Units
are measured
in pounds sterling.
Overall
, the UK
spent
more
money
on consumers
goods
than France in the period
given
. Both the British and the French
spent
most of their
money
on cars whereas the least amount of
money
was
spent
on perfume in the UK compared to
cameras
in France.
Furthermore
, the most significant difference in
expenditure
between the two countries was on
cameras
. In terms of cars
people
in the UK
spent
about £450, 000 on this as opposed to the French at £400, 000.
Similarly
, the British
expenditure
was higher on books than the French (around £400, 000 and £300, 000
respectively
)
. In the UK,
expenditure
on
cameras
(
just
over £350, 000) was over
double
than of France, which was
only
£150, 000.
On the other hand
, the amount of
money
paid out on the remaining
goods
was higher in France. Above £350, 000 was
spent
by the French on computers which was
slightly
more than the British who
spent
exactly £350, 000. Neither of the countries
spent
much on perfume which accounted for £200, 000 of
expenditure
in France
but
under £150, 000 in the UK.
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