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The chart below shows the average annual fizzy drink consumption per person in five countries in the year 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Units are measured in liters. You should write around 150 words.

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The bar chart provides depicts statistical information on the amount of carbonated drink consumption is measured in liters between two industrial brands, coca-cola and Pepsi in five countries in 2002, included Egypt, Peru, Norway, Germany, New Zealand, and Hungary. Overall, New Zealand tends to reach a peak with the highest amount of soft drinks consumption on both brands. Furthermore, residents in Peru consumed Pepsi with the least amount in five nations. It is clear that consumer spending on both Coke and Pepsi was noticeably higher in New Zealand at about 36 liters and 32 liters perspectively. Compared to Hungary, the consumption of soft drinks is around 28 liters and under 25 liters. Thus, consumers in Peru hold the second position of consuming Coke out of 5 nations, at around 33 liters, while its other brand’s amount was the lowest in the chart. On the contrary, Egypt and Norway both have the same amount of Pepsi with around 17 liters but Egypt had around 10 liters higher than Norway of Coke consumption. Last but not least, the comparison of the consumption of fizzy drinks in Germany is insignificant at around under 20 liters.
The bar chart provides depicts statistical information on the
amount
of carbonated
drink
consumption
is measured
in liters between two industrial brands, coca-cola and Pepsi in five countries in 2002, included Egypt, Peru, Norway, Germany, New Zealand, and Hungary.

Overall
, New Zealand tends to reach a peak with the highest
amount
of soft
drinks
consumption
on both brands.
Furthermore
, residents in Peru consumed Pepsi with the least
amount
in five nations.

It is
clear
that consumer spending on both Coke and Pepsi was
noticeably
higher in New Zealand at about 36 liters and 32 liters
perspectively
. Compared to Hungary, the
consumption
of soft
drinks
is
around
28 liters and under 25 liters.
Thus
, consumers in Peru hold the second position of consuming Coke out of 5 nations, at
around
33 liters, while its other brand’s
amount
was the lowest in the chart.

On the contrary
, Egypt and Norway both have the same
amount
of Pepsi with
around
17 liters
but
Egypt had
around
10 liters higher than Norway of Coke
consumption
. Last
but
not least, the comparison of the
consumption
of fizzy
drinks
in Germany is insignificant at
around
under 20 liters.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the average annual fizzy drink consumption per person in five countries in the year 2002.

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4 paragraphs
192 words
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