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The pie chart and table provide information about four key causes of soil erosion and their influence on North America, Europe, and Oceania over the 1990s.

The pie chart and table provide information about four key causes of soil erosion and their influence on North America, Europe, and Oceania over the 1990s. 77ny
The pie chart and table provide information about four key causes of soil erosion and their influence on North America, Europe, and Oceania over the 1990s. Overall, three main aspects affected to agriculture were deforestation, over-cultivation, and overgrazing. It is seen that the percentage of degraded land in the European region was the greatest compared to all remained zones. Overharvesting is the main cause of land degradation; the percentage of its influence was over a third of the total. The figure for removal of trees was about one-third of the total, while that for excessive cultivation was less than 30 %. The rate of other reasons that influenced the productivity of land was a tiny 7 %. The main problem for North America was over-growing, more than 3 % of total land became less productive because of that. However, that factor was not affected to Oceania at all, but approximately 11% of total deteriorated land by the reason of grazing. Removing of tree cover in Europe undesired almost 10 % of the total land.
The pie chart and table provide information about four key causes of soil erosion and their influence on North America, Europe, and Oceania over the 1990s.

Overall
, three main aspects
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to agriculture were deforestation, over-cultivation, and overgrazing. It is
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seen
that the percentage of degraded
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in the European region was the greatest compared to all remained zones.

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land
degradation; the percentage of its influence was over a third of the
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. The figure for removal of trees was about one-third of the
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total
, while that for excessive cultivation was less than 30 %. The rate of other reasons that influenced the productivity of
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land
was a tiny 7 %.

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main problem for North America was over-growing, more than 3 % of
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became less productive
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to Oceania at all,
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approximately 11% of
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deteriorated
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by the reason of grazing. Removing of tree cover in Europe undesired almost 10 % of the
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total
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IELTS academic The pie chart and table provide information about four key causes of soil erosion and their influence on North America, Europe, and Oceania over the 1990s.

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