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The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.

The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries. ek5x
The bar chart compares the spending on six distinct products by users in Britain, France, Italy, and Germany. Overall, it is clear that Britain contributes the highest amount on all goods while Germany spends the least on every good except perfumes. However, France and Italy spend an equal amount on toys, and France and Germany witness equal spending on personal stereos. In terms of photographic films, approximately 170 pounds accounted for Britain, as compared to 150 pounds by Germany which is far lesser than Britain. The amount spends by France and Italy accounting for 165 and 155 pounds, respectively. In terms of toys, the people Britain remains popular to purchase toys over 165 pounds, and people of Germany still far lower, contributed for 145 pounds. In terms of CDs, it is relatively higher in France than in Italy, with less than 160 pounds, in France, compared to 150 pounds in Italy. However, Britain and Germany spend a relatively similar amount on CDs as compared to toys. With regard to, tennis racquets, personal stereos, Britain spends equal on both items with 155 pounds, and Germany and Italy also spend an equal amount on both categories. However, France and Germany spend an equal amount on personal stereos with more than 145 pounds. Moreover, Italy spends an equal amount on perfumes and tennis racquets with 155 pounds, and France spends only 145 pounds on tennis racquets. The spending on perfumes is much greater in Britain with 160 pounds whereas France spends little more than Germany, represented to more than 145 pounds and 150 pounds, sequentially.
The bar chart compares the spending on six distinct products by users in Britain, France, Italy, and Germany.

Overall
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that Britain contributes the highest
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on all
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goods
while Germany
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spends
the least on every
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good
except perfumes.
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, France and Italy
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on toys, and France and Germany witness
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spending on personal stereos.

In terms of photographic films, approximately
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170 pounds
accounted for Britain, as compared to
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150 pounds
by Germany which is far lesser than Britain. The
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spends
by France and Italy accounting for 165 and
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155 pounds
,
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. In terms of toys, the
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Britain remains popular to
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toys over
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165 pounds
, and
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of Germany
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145 pounds
. In terms of CDs, it is
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160 pounds
, in France, compared to
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150 pounds
in Italy.
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, Britain and Germany
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on CDs as compared to toys.

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155 pounds
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145 pounds
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155 pounds
, and France
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145 pounds
on tennis racquets. The spending on perfumes is much greater in Britain with
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160 pounds
whereas France
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more than Germany, represented to more than
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145 pounds
and
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150 pounds
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sequentially
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.

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