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The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.

The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries. JEew
The above horizental bar chart dipicts the information about the four European acountries amount spent on six consumer goods. Yellow, Black, Orange, Blue represents the countries Britain, France, Italy, and Germany respectively. X-axis shows the amount spent in numbers. Whereas, Y-axis exhibits 6 different consumer goods. As observed in the chart, Britain is one of the top most spending in all the consumer products. Both Britain and Italy occupies the same amount on tennis racquets which is 155. Moreover, Italy spends more on toys which is more than 155. On consumer goods like Photographic Film, Perfumes, Tennis racquets italy spends samw which is 155 and the least spend is 150 on personal stereos. France is the country which spends more on photographic films just like Britain and minimises its spending in tennis racquets which is 145. Germany is the country which spends equal amount of 150 on three different goods like photographic film, perfumes, tennis racquets.
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. Yellow, Black, Orange, Blue represents the countries Britain, France, Italy, and Germany
respectively
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As observed in the chart, Britain is one of the top most spending in all the
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products. Both Britain and Italy occupies the same
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on tennis racquets which is 155.
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, Italy
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more on toys which is more than 155. On
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like Photographic Film, Perfumes, Tennis racquets
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italy
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which is 155 and the least
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is 150 on personal stereos.

France is the country which
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more on photographic films
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like Britain and
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its spending in tennis racquets which is 145. Germany is the country which
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of 150 on three
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.

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