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The given bar chart compares the money spent on different consumer goods by the people of four European countries namely Britain, France, Italy and Germany.

The given bar chart compares the money spent on different consumer goods by the people of four European countries namely Britain, France, Italy and Germany. q9jD
The given bar chart compares the money spent on different consumer goods by the people of four European countries namely Britain, France, Italy and Germany. As is observed from the illustration, British spent more money on those consumer goods while Germans spent the least to buy them. As is given in the bar graph, British people spent more than 170 thousand pound sterling for photographic films which is the highest amount spent on any consumer good by them as well as than other countries. British people also spent more than 160 thousand pound sterling for purchasing Toys and CDs, which is more than any other given nation. For perfumes, Tennis racquets and personal stereos they spent more than other nations as well. On the other hand, French people spent around 165 thousand pound sterling on purchasing photographic films which makes it the highest amount they spent on consumer goods. They spent about 158 thousand on Toys which is a tie with the Italian people. For photographic films, toys and CDs, their spending totalled second highest among the given four nations. Finally, they spent less than 150 thousand on remaining consumer goods. Italian citizens spent around 150 thousand on personal stereos, tennis racquets and CDs while they spent about 5 thousand more on photographic films and toys. Finally, German people spent less in all consumer good items than any other nation and their average spending was 145 thousand which is less than the other nations.
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consumer
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of four European countries
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spent
more money on those
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consumer
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goods
while Germans
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spent
the least to
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in the bar graph, British
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spent
more than 170 thousand pound sterling for
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photographic
films which is the highest amount
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spent
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consumer
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good
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countries. British
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Toys
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hand, French
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around 165 thousand pound sterling on purchasing
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photographic
films which
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about 158 thousand on
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Toys
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second highest among the
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less than 150 thousand on remaining
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goods
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around 150 thousand on personal stereos, tennis racquets and CDs while they
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about 5 thousand more on
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toys
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, German
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less in all
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and their average spending was 145 thousand which is less than the
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IELTS academic The given bar chart compares the money spent on different consumer goods by the people of four European countries namely Britain, France, Italy and Germany.

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