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The diagram below shows how the Australian bureau of meteorology collect up to the minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecast

The diagram below shows how the Australian bureau of meteorology collect up to the minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecast Y7pm

The provided diagram illustrate the various step used by the bureau of meteorology in Australia to gathered data regarding weather for accurate forecasts. Overall its clear that, four main steps such as incoming information, analysis and forecasting, preparing the broadcast and broadcast to public used for reliable weather forecasts. The key takeaway from the figure is that, four stages used by bureau of meteorology to collect weather informations. In first two stages they collected the incoming information through satlite, radar and dulting buoy. Data which is collected by satellite transforms to satellite photo and from the radar information passes to radar screen furthermore some data collected by buoy that turns in to synoptic chart for the analysis and forecasting. Next two process shows analysed and forecasted information prepared for broadcast with the help of computer. Final stage they used various social media such as TV, newspaper, radio and recorded announcement to present the reliable forecast.

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