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The bar chart below gives information about the number of students studying Computer Science at a UK university between 2010 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below gives information about the number of students studying Computer Science at a UK university between 2010 and 2012. 17GM
The bar chart compares both men and women students into two different categories namely Home and International students studying computer science at UK universities from 2010 to 2012. Overall, the peak number of native students were studied in 2012 for both omen and women while the lowest point was 2011 for men and 2010 for women respectively. In contrast, International students were studied highest in 2012 and the lowest was in 2010 for both genders. To begin, the native men students were about 40 % in 2010 being higher than women students at approximately 8%. Then, it declined to 23% in 2011 and rose to 43 % in 2012. whereas, the native women students resulted in an annual rate of 33% in 2010. However, the figure experienced steady growth during the next two years. It rose to 43% in 2011 and increased by around 2% in 2012. In Contrast, the international men and women students showed steady growth during this period. The rates were about 20% and 17% respectively and rose to approximately 5% each in 2011. Moreover, the international men students showed a drastic improvement of 22% and girls with a steady growth of 3% in 2012.
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studying computer science at UK universities from 2010 to 2012.

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while the lowest point was 2011 for
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and 2010 for
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highest in 2012 and the lowest was in 2010 for both genders.

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were about 40 % in 2010 being higher than
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at approximately 8%. Then, it declined to 23% in 2011 and rose to 43 % in 2012.
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resulted in an annual rate of 33% in 2010.
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steady growth during this period. The rates were about 20% and 17%
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a drastic improvement of 22% and girls with a steady growth of 3% in 2012.

IELTS academic The bar chart below gives information about the number of students studying Computer Science at a UK university between 2010 and 2012.

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