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The chart below shows the amount of area used for growing grains between 1990 and 2010 in a state in Canada v.2

The chart below shows the amount of area used for growing grains between 1990 and 2010 in a state in Canada v. 2
The provided bar graph gives information about amount of land used for growing grains during 1990, 2000 and 2010 in a state in Canada. Overall, it is clear that Red field observed the maximum acres of land for growing grains, while the least area accounted for others. As can be seen from the graph that Red field shared same amount of land for growing grains in 1990 and 2000, it was exact 60 acres but, it dropped to at around 53 acres in 2010. However, the least piece of land was used by others (below 5 acres) in the given year. With regards to further information, Sunny valley and Spring plains saw the fluctuation in used area for grow grains. Below 40 acres land used by Sunny valley in 1990, which inclined to near 43 acres in the middle year and went down sharply at around 38 acres in 2010. While, Spring plains used 35 acres in 1990 and after sharp decline in 2000 it went up to 22 acres in 2010.
The provided bar graph gives information about amount of
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land
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for growing
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grains
during 1990, 2000 and 2010 in a state in Canada.

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, it is
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clear
that Red field observed the maximum
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acres
of
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land
for growing
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grains
, while the least area accounted for others.

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seen
from the graph that Red field shared same amount of
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land
for growing
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grains
in 1990 and 2000, it was exact 60
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acres
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but
, it dropped to at around 53
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acres
in 2010.
However
, the least piece of
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land
was
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used
by others (below 5
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acres)
in the
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given
year.

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further
information, Sunny valley and Spring plains
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saw
the fluctuation in
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used
area for grow
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grains
. Below 40
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acres
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land
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used
by Sunny valley in 1990, which inclined to near 43
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acres
in the middle year and went down
sharply
at around 38
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acres
in 2010. While, Spring plains
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used
35
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acres
in 1990 and after sharp decline in 2000 it went up to 22
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acres
in 2010.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
18Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the amount of area used for growing grains between 1990 and 2010 in a state in Canada v. 2

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6.5
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