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THE CHART BELOW SHOWS THAT THE DISTRIBUTION OF DIFFERENT INCOME GROUPS IN CITIES AND REGIONAL CENTRES OF AUSTRAILIA.

THE CHART BELOW SHOWS THAT THE DISTRIBUTION OF DIFFERENT INCOME GROUPS IN CITIES AND REGIONAL CENTRES OF AUSTRAILIA. jDKmX
The bar chart illustrates that the income groups in cities and regional centres of Australia by various average income such as Low, Lower middle, Middle, high. Overall, it can be seen that the middle income same as Lower middle income in both cities and regional A glance at the bar chart reflects that, in cities and regional centres middle income source has similar percentage of population about 35% -34% respectively. In addition, Lower middle income at cities is 30% while, in regional centres at 27%. Moreover, Low income and high incomes has lowest percentage increasing people, lower income at 28% and 23% in cities and regional centres respectively. High income has least in regional centres and slightly increased at cities that accounts to 15% and 20%. Also in both cities and regional centres peak at low and lower middle and there are majority of people increased is similar except low and high.
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centres
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source has similar percentage of population about 35% -34%
respectively
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centres
respectively
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High
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IELTS academic THE CHART BELOW SHOWS THAT THE DISTRIBUTION OF DIFFERENT INCOME GROUPS IN CITIES AND REGIONAL CENTRES OF AUSTRAILIA.

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6.0
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