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the chart below shows participation in certain leisure activities by children in Australia.write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

the chart below shows participation in certain leisure activities by children in Australia. write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. 0jnn
The bar graph describes how 5 to 14 year children in Australia engage themselves during free time. It is clear that boys are involved more in leisure activities instead of girls. It is evident that one third of boys engage in bike riding whereas 60% of girls ride bike in free time. In addition, four fifth of boys play electronic games and, three fifth of girls involve in electronic and computer games. Similarly, the percentage of boys and girls go rollerblading is 40% and 30% respectively. The majority of proportion of children are interested in watching television which accounts same for both the sexes which is 100% consecutively. On the other hand, art and craft is more popular among girls with more than half of the proportion while, boys is about 40%.
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how 5 to 14 year children in Australia engage themselves during free time. It is
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clear
that
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boys
are involved
more in leisure activities
instead
of girls.

It is evident that one third of
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boys
engage in bike riding whereas 60% of
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girls
ride bike in free time.
In addition
, four fifth of
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boys
play electronic games and, three fifth of
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girls
involve in electronic and computer games.
Similarly
, the percentage of
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boys
and
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girls
go rollerblading is 40% and 30%
respectively
.

The majority of proportion of children
are interested
in watching television which accounts same for both the sexes which is 100%
consecutively
.

On the other hand
, art and craft is more popular among
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girls
with more than half of the proportion while,
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boys
is about 40%.
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IELTS academic the chart below shows participation in certain leisure activities by children in Australia. write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
132 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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