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The chart below shows information about ticket sales for performances at the National Theatre over a six-month period. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.

The chart below shows information about ticket sales for performances at the National Theatre over a six-month period. BYy6m
The table gives progression in ticket sales of five performances at National Theater from January to June. Overall, mime is the type that made people impressive most as "Humorous Situations" by National Mime Troupe got the highest number of tickets sold at 5000. In addition, audiences are also interested in contrasting stages, as both "Swan Lake" from City Ballet and "Rock Star Live! " ended at second place in the statistic information with 4750 seats were sold out. Classical music, whereas, did not get critical attention from the public, compared to the three performances mentioned above. The figure shows that only 3000 people went to the theater for "Work of Beethoven" by the National Symphony Orchestra. Last but not least, the number of tickets sold in opera was the lowest, which was half of the mime performers. To sum up, the crowd who went to the theater has enjoyed various classical artworks.
The table gives progression in ticket sales of five performances at National Theater from January to June.

Overall
, mime is the type that made
people
impressive most as
"
Humorous Situations
"
by National Mime Troupe
got
the highest number of tickets sold at 5000.
In addition
, audiences are
also
interested in contrasting stages, as both
"
Swan Lake
"
from City Ballet and
"
Rock Star
Live
!
"
ended
at second place in the statistic information with 4750 seats
were sold
out. Classical music, whereas, did not
get
critical attention from the public, compared to the three performances mentioned above. The figure
shows
that
only
3000
people
went to the theater for
"
Work of Beethoven
"
by the National Symphony Orchestra. Last
but
not least, the number of tickets sold in opera was the lowest, which was half of the mime performers.

To sum up, the crowd who went to the theater has enjoyed various classical artworks.
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