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The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries.

The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries. oRxdD
The bar chart illustrates information about percentage of some problems by people who are living abroad according to the range of ages. It can be seen that the chart gives information that everyone with different of ages find both finances and healthcare are the most difficult problems. Eventually, it is clear that the highest percentage shows in middle and in older age groups sorting out healthcare 36% and 37% respectively. However, 28% of people who are aged in 55. they find it hard in healthy lifestyle is lower the both range aged. In the other hand the most highest percentage indicated in finance category between 35-554 aged group nearly for 40% and reached the top in comparison with other categories. Although people over 55 years old find it easier and percentage is much lower 29%. Middle age group has the biggest indicator among the other groups which the problem is finding school for them children about 19%. In contrast, only people who aged 18-34 have 6% of this problem while people in over 55 group us the lowes 3%.
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who are living abroad according to the range of ages.

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that the chart gives information that everyone with
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of ages find both finances and healthcare are the most difficult
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in middle and in older age
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sorting out healthcare 36% and 37%
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in healthy lifestyle is lower the both range aged.

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indicated in finance category between 35-554 aged
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over 55 years
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find it easier and
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is much lower 29%. Middle age
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has the biggest indicator among the other
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is finding school for them children about 19%.

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who aged 18-34 have 6% of this
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in over 55
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IELTS academic The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries.

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