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The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.

The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989. 5jEP
The chart provides data about the average prices of a house in five various countries, namely New York, Madrid, Tokyo, Frankfurt and London throughout the period from 1990 to 2002 in comparison with 1989. Overall, almost all of the countries saw a significant growth in the percentage of changes of house prices during the period shown apart from Frankfurt. In terms of the proportion of house prices in average, There were substantial decreases of approximately 8% between 1990 and 1995 in both Tokyo and London while Madrid and Frankfurt experienced moderate climbs of about 2% and 3% respectively. In addition, New York saw a considerable reduction of 5% during the period from 1990 to 1995. In contrast, the percentage of average prices of a house increased significantly to 5%, 4% and -5% in New York, Madrid and Tokyo from 1996 to 2002 respectively. In addition to this, London underwent an enormous rise in the proportion of house prices, reaching a peak at about 12% in the second period. However, Frankfurt saw a slight decline of about 2% in the proportion of house prices between 1996 and 2002.
The chart provides data about the average
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in five various countries,
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from 1990 to 2002
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during the
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shown apart from Frankfurt.

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in average, There were substantial decreases of approximately 8% between 1990 and 1995 in both Tokyo and London while Madrid and Frankfurt experienced moderate climbs of about 2% and 3%
respectively
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a considerable reduction of 5% during the
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from 1990 to 1995.

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contrast, the percentage of average
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increased
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to 5%, 4% and -5% in New York, Madrid and Tokyo from 1996 to 2002
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, reaching a peak at about 12% in the second
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a slight decline of about 2% in the proportion of
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between 1996 and 2002.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.

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