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The bar chart illustrates information about different people habits of drinking coffee and tea bought in five Australian towns.

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The bar chart illustrates information about different people habits of drinking coffee and tea bought in five Australian towns. Overall, many people’s were likely to went cafe for drinking coffee and tea in Melbourne, Sydney, Hobart, Brisbane and Adelaide, while the lowest percentages for who’s consumed the fresh coffee. Generally, Melbourne, Sydney and Hobart have the highest proportions out of the five cities, residents went to cafe for drunk coffee and tea by well over 60%, followed by Brisbane and Adelaide with just under 55%. On other hand, the citizens of Hobart, Adelaide and Brisbane used to drunk soluble coffee, those percentage approximately from ( 50% to 55%) but citizens of Sydney has around 45%. By contrast, Brisbane and Adelaide were recorded the lest proportion of consuming fresh coffee with just under 35%, then Hobart close to 40%. However, populations of Melbourne and Sydney between 40% and 45% respectively.

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