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The chart below shows how much money is spent in the budget on different sectors by the UAE government in 2000.

The chart below shows how much money is spent in the budget on different sectors by the UAE government in 2000. dPV2

The above mentioned pie chart shows different budgets related to the amount of money that United Arabs Emirates government spent in different sectors. Whilst most of the budgetary figures are directly link to social security sector with 100 billion, health and personal social services reached the reduced amount of 53 billion. These two mentioned sectors turn into the main issue where the broad Arabic Budget goes. In contrast, the lowest figure is represented by the transport sector, which estimation reached 9 billion. Very similar quantity is drawn by the Industry, agriculture and employment followed by Housing, herritage and environment, emerging as the shortest allocation provided by the Arabic Leaders. However, debt interest and other expenditure cost 23 billion to the Arabic inhabitants, number very similar to the defence departure. Moreover, the cabinet contributed with higher Budget to education, turning into the third largest sector where the executive power relied on.

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