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Southland's main exports in 200 and 2021, and future projections for 2025

Southland's main exports in 200 and 2021, and future projections for 2025 MJo6
This chart indicates data about Southland’s main exports in different areas of interest (international tourism, dairy products and meat products) of mainly two years: 2000, 2021 and for future statistics of 2025. Starting with the year 2000, it is noticeable that exports were not as high as nowadays or as expected in 2025. For the international tourism sector, Southland had over 8 billion pounds exported. On the other hand, dairy products were less exported with almost 7 billion. Regarding meat products, exportations were close to dairy products, with 7 billion pounds. For the year we are currently living, international tourism and dairy products increased for 1 billion pound and nearly 3 billion pounds in that order. However, there was a decrease of 1 million pounds for or meat products. It is expected that for 2025 there won’t be as drastic data changes as 2021. For international tourism, we will experience an increasing of 1 billion pounds, ending almost in 10 billion dollars of exportations. For dairy products and meat products it is expected to have less exportations than 2021, in a range of 1 million and 1 billion pounds leaving them with over 9 billion pounds and 6 billion pounds in that order. In conclusion, we can notice how volatile exportations in Southland are, mainly for the dairy products sector. For international tourism exportations, clearly we can se how number are getting bigger through the years. However, in the case of meat products exportations is the contrary.
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2000, it is noticeable that exports were not as high as nowadays or as
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in 2025. For the
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sector, Southland had over 8
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were less exported with almost 7
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