Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

The bar chart shows the percentage of car manufacturer's total sales in North America, South America, Europe and Asia from 2006 to 2010.

The bar chart shows the percentage of car manufacturer's total sales in North America, South America, Europe and Asia from 2006 to 2010. BKMX

The bar chart demonstrates the total proportion of automobiles sold by different manufacturers across four continents, namely North and South America, Europe and Asia, during five consecutive years, starting from 2006. Overall, while cars in Asia and Europe accounted for the largest sales, those in the other two regions constituted less purchases. Another point worth mentioning is that while in the last year car sales in North America returned to where it started after witnessing a continuous downward trend, the figure in South America saw a considerable drop. To begin with, the year 2006 experienced a similarity in the percentage of automobiles sold in all the continents except North America, at almost 30%. Asia, throughout the period, increased it sales to an impressive rate of 50%. 2008 was the most successful year for Europe because it sold approximately 40% of its cars this time. As for the two continents of the US, there was a constant fall in cars purchased in North America from 2006 to 2009. However, it remarkably climbed back to where it began, at just over 10%. South America, although starting at an incredible proportion of 30%, plummeted to under one tenth in 2010.

The bar chart demonstrates the total proportion of automobiles sold by This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 manufacturers across four continents, namely
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnorthward
North
 and South America, Europe and Asia, during five consecutive years, starting from 2006.

Overall
, while You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
 in Asia and Europe accounted for the largest sales, those in the other two regions constituted Did you mean "fewer"? The noun purchases is countable.fewer
less
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
purchases
. Another point worth mentioning is that while in the last You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 sales in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnorthward
North
 America returned to where it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 after witnessing a continuous downward trend, the figure in South America This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 a considerable drop.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 2006 experienced a similarity in the percentage of automobiles sold in all the continents except You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnorthward
North
 America, at almost 30%. Asia, throughout the period, increased it sales to an impressive rate of 50%. 2008 was the most successful You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 for Europe This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it sold approximately 40% of its You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
 this time.

As for the two continents of the US, there was a constant fall in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnorthward
North
 America from 2006 to 2009. However
, it remarkably
 climbed back to where it began, at This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 over 10%. South America, although starting at an incredible proportion of 30%, plummeted to under one tenth in 2010. 