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The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012. pr59

The given line graph illustrates the jobless rate of the countryside and the city in Australia over the period of 2012. We can see that the jobless rate of the countryside had a downward tendency while the trend of the city had a noticeable rise throughout the year. The first quarter shows that the highest and lowest unemployment percentage between rural and urban areas is 6. 5 and just above 2 respectively. Afterwards, the former gradually reduced to 5 and the latter leapt to 4 in the second quarter which is merely 1% difference. According to the provided information, the unemployment rate in rural areas declined slowly and rose subsequently until the fourth quarter, while the unemployment rate in urban areas experienced a fluctuation from 4% decreased to 2% between the second and the third quarter. Overall, the unemployment rate of both districts had reached 5% by the end of the year.

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 that the jobless You use this word too often, consider replacing it withestimatequotapercentageamountstandard
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 of the countryside had a downward tendency while the trend of the city had a noticeable rise throughout the year.

The first
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 that the highest and lowest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcutback
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 percentage between rural and urban areas is 6. 5 and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
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Afterwards, the former gradually
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reduced
 to 5 and the latter leapt to 4 in the second You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermportionpartone-fourthfourth
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 which is merely
 1% difference.

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unemployment
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 in rural areas declined slowly
 and rose subsequently
 until the fourth You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermportionpartone-fourthfourth
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, while the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcutback
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 in urban areas experienced a fluctuation from 4% decreased to 2% between the second and the third You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermportionpartone-fourthfourth
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Overall
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcutback
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 of both districts had reached 5% by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the year. 