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The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accomodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accomodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. xnDb
The given column chart illustrates the rate of house for rent and other being owned in uk and Wales in a period if almost a century. In general, percentage of rented house tend to decrease this time frame. Beside that, the figure for owned house showed a remarkable rise. In 1918, the rate of owned accomodation stood at about 20%, where as the rest indicates the other option. Over the next hunred years household owned rises significantly to the peak of nearly. In the final year, after witnessed a long eccelerated period, owned households ended at more than 60%, While the other only half of ít.
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uk
and Wales in a period if almost a century.
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, percentage of rented
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house
tend to decrease this time frame. Beside that, the figure for
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owned
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house
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showed
a remarkable rise. In 1918, the rate of
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owned
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accomodation
stood at about 20%,
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where as
the rest indicates the other option. Over the
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hunred
years household
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rises
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. In the final year, after witnessed a long
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eccelerated
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households ended at more than 60%, While the other
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accomodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

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