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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. 9b7p
The pie chart gives information about water used for industrial, agricultural and domestic area in different countries the data given in percentage. Overall it can be seen that highest water used for agricultural and list consumed for domestic in the world. To start with industrial purpose north america and Europe are lead in the world moreover south africa and south east asia are all most similar used. also africa and central Asia are around 7 and 5 percentage respectively. to add-in africa and central Asia are top highest water consum for agricultural. Furthermore not only south east asia but also south america are second maximum water utilized for farming. Additional Europe is a nearly a third part of water used for agricultural, also north america is 39% water use in farming. On the other hand domestic purpose central Asia and south east asia are same water ratio used, at the same time Europe is a small minority water part used in day to day life after all south america and north america are nearly 19% and 13% used for domestic purpose
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IELTS academic The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

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