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The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000, 2018, and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000, 2018, and future projections for 2025. Lrrx3
The bar graph illustrates the value in billions of pounds southland’s primary exports: international tourism, dairy products, as well as meat products across 2000, 2019 and forecasts of their worth in 2025. In 2000 international tourism was only worth about 8 billion pounds, before it rose to just under 9 billion in 2019, and it's evaluated to be worth just under 9 billion in 2025. Similarly, dairy products saw sharp growth from 7 billion pounds in 2000 to a whopping 10 billion pounds, 19 years later. however, their value is projected to decrease slightly to 9 and a half billion in 2025. In contrast, the export of meat products peaked at 6 billion at the turn of the century and has declined ever since, falling to about 5 and a half in 2019. and it’s anticipated to keep decreasing to 5 billion 25 years from its peak. Overall international tourism and dairy products remain and are expected to continue being southland’s strongest exports, while sales of meat products are in gradual decline, with no anticipated departure from this downward trend.
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southland
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across 2000, 2019 and forecasts of their worth in 2025.

In 2000 international tourism was
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, dairy
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pounds in 2000 to a whopping 10
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, the export of meat
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peaked at 6
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at the turn of the century and has declined ever since, falling to about 5 and a
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decreasing to 5
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25 years from its peak.

Overall
international tourism and dairy
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remain and are
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southland
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are in gradual decline, with no anticipated departure from this downward trend.
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IELTS academic The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000, 2018, and future projections for 2025.

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