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The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Gk3m
The displayed bar chart is given information about the proportion of people who went to fast-food restaurants in the 3 years (2003, 2006, and 2013). First, at the start of the period, people having fast-food once a week stood at just over 30% and rose to around 33% in 2006, after which it experienced a drop to approximately 5% in 2013. In contrast, the group of people who went to restaurants once or twice a month witnessed a decline of 10% between 2003 and 2006. Following this, it surpassed people eating fast food every week by raising to roughly speaking 33% in the final year of the period. On the other hand, Regarding the lowest percentages, people consuming fast food at restaurants every day remained below 5% throughout the period given. Similarly, the second least serious percentages were reached by people who have never been to fast food restaurants over a 10 years period. Initially, it settled at 10% in 2013 and dwindled slightly over the following years. As an overall trend, a broad assessment of data reveals that the ratio of the public having their meals at fast-food restaurants only once per week was the most significant between 2003 and 2006, it was replaced by a group representing people who ate there either one or two times a month in 2013. Furthermore, the lowest percentage was reached by people eating there on a daily basis.
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in the 3 years (2003, 2006, and 2013).

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over 30% and rose to around 33% in 2006, after which it experienced a drop to approximately 5% in 2013.
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, the group of
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people
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went to
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once or twice a month witnessed a decline of 10% between 2003 and 2006. Following this, it surpassed
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people
eating
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food every week by raising to roughly speaking 33% in the final year of the period.

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, Regarding the lowest percentages,
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consuming
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food at
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every day remained below 5% throughout the period
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food
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over a 10 years period.
Initially
, it settled at 10% in 2013 and dwindled
slightly
over the following years.

As an
overall
trend, a broad assessment of data reveals that the ratio of the public having their meals at
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ate there either one or two times a month in 2013.
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, the lowest percentage
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by
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eating there on a daily basis.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

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