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The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012. ljjNX
The line chart compares the Australian unemployment percentages between rural areas and urban areas in 2012. Overall, it can be clearly seen that the figure in countryside zones droppped gradually whereas the urban unemployment rate rose significantly. To begin with, the rate in rural areas stood approximately at 6. 5, followed by a large drop by 2 in the first two quarters. Consequently, the rural unemployment rate experienced a fluctuated period, started with a rebound to 5. 5 in the third quarter After that, the rate showed a steady peried in the last quarter of the year which finished around 5. On the other hand, the urban unemployment rate stood at 2, then there was a sharp increase to 4 in the first two quarters. After that, the figure in city zones plunged to the initial percentages of 2 in the next quarter. Finally, there was an erratic rise by 3 in the last quarter.
The line chart compares the Australian
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unemployment
percentages between rural areas and urban areas in 2012.
Overall
, it can be
clearly
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seen
that the figure in countryside zones
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droppped
gradually
whereas the urban
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rate
rose
significantly
.

To
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begin
with, the
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rate
in rural areas stood approximately at 6. 5, followed by a large drop by 2 in the
first
two
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quarters
.
Consequently
, the rural
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unemployment
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rate
experienced a fluctuated period,
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started
with a rebound to 5. 5 in the third
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quarter
After that, the
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rate
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showed
a steady
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peried
in the last
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quarter
of the year which finished around 5.

On the other hand
, the urban
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unemployment
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rate
stood at 2, then there was a sharp increase to 4 in the
first
two
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quarters
. After that, the figure in city zones plunged to the initial percentages of 2 in the
next
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quarter
.
Finally
, there was an erratic rise by 3 in the last
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quarter
.
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IELTS academic The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
155 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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