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The proportion of visiting abroad by UK residents and to the UK by foreign people

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The proportion of visiting abroad by UK residents and to the UK by foreign people are shown by graphs. moreover, where was most popular for them in 1999. Az an overall trend, it can clearly be seen that, the number of people who travel to and from the UK was near each other, while, the UK residents go abroad more than 50 million in 1999 and most popular country who they travel was France. In 1991 the visitors who travel to and from the UK was (10million and almost 12 million) and then rose steadily to mid of 1985. In addition, the number of visiting other countries more sharply to almost 52 million in 1999, compared with the visiting to the UK gradually increased by the other countries of people. In conclusion we can see in 1999 higher and lower countries which more popular for the residents UK. turkey, Greece and USA had lest than 4million visitors, by contrast France and Spain had close competition and were most famous for them.

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