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The two diagrams give information about people who live alone by age and gender and percent of the number of bedrooms in one-person households in England in 2011. Overall, between the ages of 16 to 39, the number of males living alone than that of females, but from the age of 65 to 85 and over, the latter is more significant than the former. Generally, the female is bigger than the male in age group. Among these types, the person who owns the most bedrooms is 3-bedrooms, but 5 or more bedrooms is the last number. In the age group, there are three periods where the quantity of males living only is higher than females: the age of 16 to 24, 25 to 34, and 35 to 49. Both of these periods, they are over 50%. At the age of 50 to 64, this rate of males and females are the same. On the contrary, in the first three periods, this rate has a slight change. The percentage of females living alone increases sharply, it seems to triple higher than that of males. In the end, the rate of females outweighs that of males. In the pie chart, the person who has a bedroom has the most number of bedrooms, at 35, 4%, followed by the person owing 2 bedrooms and 3 bedrooms at 28% and 29. 8%, respectively. The remaining of the pie chart are responsible for nearly 6. 8%, divided into 4 bedrooms at 5. 3% and 5 bedrooms and more at 1. 4%.
The two diagrams give information about
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live
alone by
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age
and gender and percent of the number of
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bedrooms
in one-person households in England in 2011.

Overall
, between the
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ages
of 16 to 39, the number of
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males
living
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alone
than that of
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females
,
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from the
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age
of 65 to 85 and over, the latter is more significant than the former.
Generally
, the
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female
is bigger than the male in
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age
group. Among these types, the person who
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owns
the most
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bedrooms
is
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3-bedrooms
,
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but
5 or more
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bedrooms
is the last number.

In the
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group, there are three periods where the quantity of
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males
living
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only
is higher than
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females
: the
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age
of 16 to 24, 25 to 34, and 35 to 49. Both of these periods, they are over 50%. At the
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age
of 50 to 64, this rate of
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and
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are the same.
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, in the
first
three periods, this rate has a slight
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. The percentage of
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living alone increases
sharply
, it seems to triple higher than that of
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males
. In the
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end
, the rate of
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females
outweighs that of males.

In the pie chart, the person who has a
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bedroom
has the most number of
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bedrooms
, at 35, 4%, followed by the person owing 2
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bedrooms
and 3
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bedrooms
at 28% and 29. 8%,
respectively
. The remaining of the pie chart are responsible for
nearly
6. 8%, divided into 4
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at 5. 3% and 5
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and more at 1. 4%.
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IELTS academic age and the number of bedrooms in one holdhouses

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