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The chart below shows annual paper production of two different industries from 2011 to 2015.

The chart below shows annual paper production of two different industries from 2011 to 2015. 7JXpb
The bar graph compares the amount of paper produced from two different industries karnaphuli and Basundhara Paper Mill Limited between 2011 and 2015. It is noticeable that the highest amount of paper produced from Basundhara paper mills in 2015. While Karnaphuli paper mills was highest in 2011. Karnaphuli and Basundhara mill also produced least amount of paper in 2011 and 2015. It is clear that Karnaphuli paper mill produced the most amount of paper than Vasundhara paper mill between 2011 and 2013. In 2011, the amount of paper produced an Karnaphuli paper mill over 40 million tonnes which was double the amount of paper produced Basundhara paper mail. In 2012, Karnaphuli paper mill also produced most amount of paper than Basundhara paper mill approximately 35 million tons and over 20 million tons, respectively. Basundhara paper Mel produced the highest amount of paper rest of the years. Basundhara paper mail produced more paper at about 45 million tonnes than the Karnaphuli paper mill down 40 million tons. In 2015, Basundhara paper mill produced more paper than Karnaphuli over 50 million and 30 millio, respectively.
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