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The given table depicts the data about modes of travel in England that have changes between the years 1985 and 2000.

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The given table depicts the data about modes of travel in England that have changes between the years 1985 and 2000. Overall, average distance travelled in miles per person per year is highest by car before the beginning of 21st century and in the first year of 21st century, distance travelled by car is highest again. In 1985, average distance travelled by each individual every year is 255 miles by feet and by bicycle is 51 miles. Car stands the highest with 3199 miles travelled. Local bus is used for the average journey of 429 miles, whereas long distance bus travelled only for 54 miles. Train's average journey was 289 miles, taxi's average travelled distance is 13 miles, whereas 450 miles has been travelled by other means of transportation. Average total distance travelled by people of England in 1985 is 4740 miles. In the year 2000, English people completed their journey by walking with the average of 237 miles, whereas 41 miles have been travelled by bicycle. Again, car stands the highest in 2000 with the distance of 4806 miles. Distance travelled by local bus, long distance bus and train is 274, 124 and 366 miles, respectively. Taxi and other means combined, travelled for 627 miles. 6475 miles is the distance travelled by all means of transportation in the year 2000.
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between the years 1985 and 2000.

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distance
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travelled
in miles per person per
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year
is
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highest
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car
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before
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year
of 21st century,
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distance
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travelled
by
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car
is highest again.

In 1985,
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distance
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travelled
by each individual every
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year
is
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255 miles
by feet and by bicycle is
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51 miles
.
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Car
stands the highest with
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3199 miles
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travelled
. Local bus is
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used
for the
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average
journey of
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429 miles
, whereas long
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distance
bus
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travelled
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for
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54 miles
. Train's
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journey was
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289 miles
, taxi's
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travelled
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distance
is
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13 miles
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450 miles
has been
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travelled
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total
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distance
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travelled
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people
of England in 1985 is
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4740 miles
.

In the
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year
2000, English
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people
completed their journey by walking with the
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of
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237 miles
, whereas
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41 miles
have been
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travelled
by bicycle. Again,
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car
stands the highest in 2000 with the
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distance
of
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4806 miles
.
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Distance
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travelled
by local bus, long
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distance
bus and train is 274, 124 and
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366 miles
,
respectively
. Taxi and other means combined,
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627 miles
.
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6475 miles
is the
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distance
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travelled
by all means of transportation in the
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year
2000.
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IELTS academic The given table depicts the data about modes of travel in England that have changes between the years 1985 and 2000.

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