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Bar chart: urban population

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The colored bar shows data about the proportion of urban dwellers in 6 distinct regions in the world. Roughly speaking, the figures for all regions see a rise over the period shown. While the urban population in North America is in the majority in all 3 years, the opposite is true for Africa. Regarding the lowest areas, namely Africa and Asia, just below 20% of people in these continents lived in cities in 1950 and the numbers of their city residents are estimated to increase to 62% and 66%, respectively by the end of the period. Additionally, the proportion of the urban population in Europe, which accounted for more than a half in 1950, will witness a significant growth of one-third as the forecast of 100 years later. Turning to the three remaining world regions, there was 42% of urban citizens in Latin America/ Caribbean, which was around 20% lower than the figures for North America and Oceania. In the year 2050, it is calculated that these percentages of both Latin America/ Caribbean and North America will rise dramatically to around 90% for each, whereas the proportion of city dwellers in Oceania will only experience a slight growth.
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data about the proportion of
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dwellers in 6 distinct regions in the world.

Roughly speaking, the figures for all regions
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see
a rise over the period shown. While the
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urban
population in North America is in the majority in all 3 years, the opposite is true for Africa.

Regarding the lowest areas,
namely
Africa and Asia,
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just
below 20% of
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people
in these continents
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lived
in cities in 1950 and the numbers of their city residents
are estimated
to increase to 62% and 66%,
respectively
by the
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end
of the period.
Additionally
, the proportion of the
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urban
population in Europe, which accounted for more than a half in 1950, will witness a significant growth of one-third as the forecast of 100 years later.

Turning to the three remaining world regions, there was 42% of
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urban
citizens in Latin America/ Caribbean, which was around 20% lower than the figures for North America and Oceania. In the year 2050, it
is calculated
that these percentages of both Latin America/ Caribbean and North America will rise
dramatically
to around 90% for each, whereas the proportion of city dwellers in Oceania will
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only
experience a slight growth.
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