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The chart below show the percentage of of five kinds of book sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The three given pie charts illustrate the popularity of different kinds of books during the period from 1972 to 2012. Overall, it can be vividly seen that the maximum sales were recorded for others books in1972, but adult fiction took the lead of in rest of the given period. Also, fiction books sales increased, while the popularity of remaining books either decreased or fluctuated. To begin with, in the year of 1972, the sale both adult fiction and children's fiction was 20% each. Both their sales inclined with time and in 2012 the contributuon of adults fiction sales was about 45%, whilst 25% children's fiction books was sold by booksellers in the same year. On the other hand, the proportion of the biography books decreased over period. It was 20% in 1972 and 15%1992, but in 2012 sales of biography books was 8%. The sales of travel books had been fluctuating, whereas popularity of other books decreased and it was 25%, 20%, and 12% in order to the year of 1972, 1992, and 2012.
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either decreased or fluctuated. To
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both adult
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and children's
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was 20% each. Both their
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inclined with time and in 2012 the contributuon of adults
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was about 45%, whilst 25% children's
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was sold
by booksellers in the same year.
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decreased over period. It was 20% in 1972 and 15%1992,
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in 2012
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of biography
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was 8%. The
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of travel
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had been fluctuating, whereas popularity of other
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decreased and it was 25%, 20%, and 12% in order to the year of 1972, 1992, and 2012.

IELTS academic The chart below show the percentage of of five kinds of book sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012.

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