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THE CHART BELOW SHOW THE PERCENTAGE OF HOUSEHOLDS WITH OWNED ANDRENTED ACCOMMODATION IN ENGLAND AND WALES BETWEEN 1918 AND 2011.

THE CHART BELOW SHOW THE PERCENTAGE OF HOUSEHOLDS WITH OWNED ANDRENTED ACCOMMODATION IN ENGLAND AND WALES BETWEEN 1918 AND 2011. Lb66n
THE PROVIDED BAR CHART ILLUSTRATES THE PROPORTION HOUSEHOLD LIVED IN RENTED HOUSES OR IN ONWED HOMES IS TWO REGIONS, WHALES AND ENGLAND FROM 1918 AND 2011. OVERALL, THE PERCENT OF LEASING HUTS DECLINES WHEREAS, THE NUMBER OF OWING A HOME INCREASES IN GIVEN PERIOD AND THE DIGIT ARE SIMILAR AT FIFTH YEAR. IT CAN BE CLEARLY SEEN THAT, IN FORMER YEAR, THE PERCENTAGE OF OWNED HOMES IS ACCOUNTED FOR MERELY ABOVE 20% WHICH, GROWS BY 10% IN TWENTY ONE YEARS AND REMAINS STEADY TILL1953. THEN, IT ROSES TO NEAR 41% IN 1961. MEANWHILE, THE DIGITS FOR RENTED HUTS IS STATED AS THE HIGHEST AT AROUND THREE FOURTH WHICH, DRASTICALLY DROPS TO 68% IN 1953 AND PLUNGE TO LESS THAN 60% IN NEXT EIGHT YEARS. THE TABULAR DATA FURTHER COLLATE THAT, IN 1971, THE PERCENT OF BOTH LEASED AND PURCHASED HUTS IS SIMILAR AT 50% WHERE LEASED HOMES DRAMATICALLY INCREASED BY 10% WHILE, PURCHASED APARTMENT FALLS BY SAME DIGITS IN 1981. AFTER ONE DECADE, AN APARTMENTON RENT SLIPS TO APPROXIMATELY 31% AND IT ENDS AT AROUND 35% SIMILARLY, THE OWNING OF APARTMENT INCLINES TO 70% AND IT ENDS AT NEAR 75% IN FINAL PERIOD.
THE PROVIDED BAR CHART ILLUSTRATES THE PROPORTION HOUSEHOLD
LIVED
IN RENTED
HOUSES
OR IN
ONWED
HOMES
IS TWO REGIONS, WHALES AND ENGLAND
FROM 1918 AND 2011
.

OVERALL
, THE PERCENT OF LEASING HUTS DECLINES WHEREAS, THE NUMBER OF OWING A HOME INCREASES IN
GIVEN
PERIOD AND THE DIGIT ARE SIMILAR AT FIFTH YEAR.

IT CAN BE
CLEARLY
SEEN
THAT, IN FORMER YEAR, THE PERCENTAGE OF
OWNED
HOMES
IS ACCOUNTED
FOR
MERELY
ABOVE 20% WHICH, GROWS BY 10% IN TWENTY ONE YEARS AND REMAINS STEADY TILL1953. THEN, IT ROSES TO NEAR 41% IN 1961. MEANWHILE, THE DIGITS FOR RENTED HUTS
IS STATED
AS THE HIGHEST AT AROUND THREE FOURTH WHICH,
DRASTICALLY
DROPS TO 68% IN 1953 AND PLUNGE TO LESS THAN 60% IN
NEXT
EIGHT YEARS.

THE TABULAR DATA
FURTHER
COLLATE THAT, IN 1971, THE PERCENT OF BOTH LEASED AND
PURCHASED
HUTS IS SIMILAR AT 50% WHERE LEASED
HOMES
DRAMATICALLY
INCREASED BY 10% WHILE,
PURCHASED
APARTMENT FALLS BY SAME DIGITS IN 1981. AFTER ONE DECADE, AN
APARTMENTON
RENT SLIPS TO APPROXIMATELY 31% AND IT ENDS AT AROUND 35%
SIMILARLY
, THE OWNING OF APARTMENT INCLINES TO 70% AND IT ENDS AT NEAR 75% IN FINAL PERIOD.
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