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The chart below show the figure for Thai tourists going overseas between 2000 and 2010 and Thailand's share of China's tourist market

The chart below show the figure for Thai tourists going overseas between 2000 and 2010 and Thailand's share of China's tourist market 2xA8M
The charts illustrate the figure of Thai tourists going overseas and Thai's share of China's tourist market during a 10-years period from 2000 to 2010. It can be seen that an upward trend was observed for both graphs. According to the bar chart, the number rose gently from 5 million people in 2000 to about 8 million in 2001. In addition, there was a gentle rise to about 11 million people in 2004. However, the figure depicted a slight drop to 7 million people in 2007. Moreover, the figure reached a peak at 15 million people in 2010.
The charts illustrate the figure of Thai tourists going overseas and Thai's share of China's tourist market during a 10-years period from 2000 to 2010. It can be
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in 2000 to about 8
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in 2001.
In addition
, there was a gentle rise to about 11
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in 2004.
However
, the figure depicted a slight drop to 7
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in 2007.
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, the figure reached a peak at 15
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IELTS academic The chart below show the figure for Thai tourists going overseas between 2000 and 2010 and Thailand's share of China's tourist market

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